Score: 6

"Meh"

submission: [DN] Techno Rocker {Remix}

date: September 12, 2009

Most of this sounds pretty muddy. Be careful with the compression and limiters and such; They really worked negatively for you here. The lead, which I'm assuming is nexus, sounds badly distorted, and the sidechain masked that to only a certain extent.

Another important thing is that your kick is far too soft for this track. It needs a lot more punch to it, because now it isn't helping your song.

I'm not going to critique the structure or composition of this song, because that isn't bad, and its not what I think you should be paying attention to. You should improve upon the mix of this first. Equalize every part more carefully, and find a better mix with limiters and compressors before finishing something. This can really help make your songs sound loads more pleasant :3

Score: 9

"Brightened up my day."

submission: (FMC) -=GASP!=-

date: August 4, 2009

I like it, it has a great feel to it. The bassline sounds very uplifting, and the lead and arp compliment it very well.
This would work well for a simplistic trance song imo, as long as you keep all the elements that this loops has which keep it so happy :3

Score: 5

"Jesus man..."

submission: Madness 4

date: July 23, 2009

Ever tried mixing this? Or using a compressor? The lack of effort towards mastering makes this sounds somewhat hard to listen to. Its like I have autism, everything is at the same level, and none of these synths sound tweaked with at all. Just picked and piled on randomly, so many of them don't match at all. The structure and composition isn't bad, its actually pretty good.

Its just the sound quality of everything is bad. The percussion sounds just ugly, and your lead sounds really weak and out of place. It also becomes repetitive towards the middle, and the bass just disappears.

You did do well though, considering what you used. But really, this isn't anything remotely special. I'm honestly not taking points off because of this, but I don't see why its so popular.

Now please, mark this review as useless since it isn't a ten.

Score: 10

"Oh my fuck"

submission: -="The ParagonX9 Song"=-

date: July 3, 2009

Dude, this notation in this is insane. I love it. I'll never be able to make something this good. That change in tempo during the second half of the song is incredible. Very fun to listen, you have to make more dnb. This is some of the best stuff I've heard on newgrounds.

Marry me.

Score: 7

"___"

submission: ParagonX9 - Chaoz Survivor

date: July 3, 2009

Nom nom nom, the synths are very tasty. And I love the change in tempo at :43, its good and stuff.

But it doesn't seem like you put very much effort into this. There are only a few a parts that play throughout the entire song. I know dnb isn't usually the most complex genre ever, but this sounds like something that could be recreated within half an hour. Especially since this isn't that different from all of your other old tracks.

I can tell that you're a great composer; Everything thats here sounds exceptional. If you just built it up a bit more, by adding more to it and making it sound less flat, this could be a masterpiece.

Score: 9

"I really like the idea"

submission: Chaoz Impact-[Anima Mix]-

date: July 1, 2009

Its just needed a bit more changes to it. For some of this song, it sounds like the original, but muffled and with less powerful drums. I'd like to be able to hear the lead a bit more clearly, because that could make this track a lot better. And you should probably raise the snares volume a bit too.

I love the second half of the song though, its much more original, and better than paragon's version. Transitions were great also, much better than I could do.

I'd just like a bit more power and clarity to the song. That would make it go from good to great.

Score: 10

"Jesus fuck"

submission: Midnight - 1st 2nd (xKake Rmx)

date: June 27, 2009

I could play this alongside professional songs and not notice the difference.
That bass is just so fucking sexy.

I'm in love.

Score: 0

"Lets name some problems..."

submission: [KKK99] Fappin them danks

date: June 24, 2009

-Everything you used is a basic FL present. And the bad ones, too. Maybe you should look around for more than a few minutes, and find something better than FL keys and the standard bass.

-Your 'rapping' was at a different tempo than everything else.

-You have the same two second melody playing throughout the entire song.

-You're mumbling most of the time, so its hard to understand what you're trying to say.

-When I can hear what you're saying, its usually a ridiculous and childish line. Try putting more effort into your lyrics.

-The random orchestral notes that you added in occasionally didn't match with the rest of the song, and it sounds like you just pressed random keys and just stuck with what you got.

I don't feel like suffering by analyzing the entire song, so thats all I'll say. You need better notation, structure, and effort to make up for your pathetic lyrics and voice. I'm not saying you shouldn't submit though; Your stuff is hilariously bad, which is the only good thing about this 'song'.

Also: CRAKA WHAT CRAKA WHAT...

Score: 8

"Pretty nice"

submission: {dj-N} The Beginning of Time

date: June 17, 2009

Overall, it was pretty enjoyable.

I just didn't like how you kind of piled too many parts on for the main section of this song. Seems kind of jumbled and all over the place. Besides that, it didn't seem like you put very much effort into the composition of this song. Its well mixed and all, but the bassline is very generic, and all the parts seem to barely build off of it. A bit uncreative in my opinion.

Still a very good and professional sounding song, I like it. You should go back to making songs like this. Its what you're best at.

Score: 10

"Incredible"

submission: Bass Piratez - Pirate Dance

date: June 4, 2009

By far the most proffesional song that ive heard on newgrounds. The intro and all the melodies were amazing and matched perfectly with the mood of the song. And the variation is great, probably my favorite thing about this song.

This is really at a whole different level compared to the other songs on newgrounds.